TEACHER FEEDBACK

FEEDBACK

1. Generally well framed. see number 4 to see what needs to be added. Mise en scene needs to be branded/themed, to promote the band, a visual motif?
2. Difficult to see how edits work with the sound. However, the jump cuts with Josh are effective. Make sure that your edits reflect concept and band.
3. Frame within a frame effect consistent with expectations of 'indy video'. Special effects section of green screen with speakers etc behind will be particularly good.
4. Missing. Re import the track. Make sure that you have enough close up's of the lead singer and band. You need a 'master ' that is cut back and forward from.